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Can you keep a secret?

Sure what?

I saw him.

Who?

God.

And he told me to keep a secret.

What was it?

That he loves me.

Really?

Yeah and he said he loves you too.

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Tuesday, February 03, 2004
Chapter 6: What he said, what he meant

Mia "lost" her father a long while ago, but he always "haunted" Mia. For the first time, in awhile, he came back. He tried his best to make her come back, even though he had hurt her a lot in an emotional way. She told him that she didn't just hurt her, but her mother and sister and a whole lot of others, which hurts her to see them hurt as well. She began to get angry. Seeing how calm he could be made her ears draw back and her hair raise up. He even had the nerve to ask for more things, like food and other supplys. He even took her sister away for a day. Mia hissed. She had enough of hearing "Gimme this, Gimme that." he even said "Can't you give me a hug?" 11 years of pain, yet he thought that 4 months was enough for little Mia to heal. Mia stomped away angerly. She could no longer stand hearing his pathetic attempts to blame others for his wrong-doings.

Mia "cried".. he told her that no one was on her side, and that he was being selfish, but he didn't care. The pain in her soul hurt her as much as daggers tearing into ones own skin. He asked for a hug again before he was about to leave. She let out her rage and said no with her eyes flaring wildly. She ran off... TBC

Posted at 2/3/2004 3:15:44 pm by Puchiko2

LonelyKitten
February 3, 2004   06:46 PM PST
 
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KeyBladeGirl
February 3, 2004   06:34 PM PST
 
My English Teacher would love your writing.... Continue Please....
 

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