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Can you keep a secret?

Sure what?

I saw him.

Who?

God.

And he told me to keep a secret.

What was it?

That he loves me.

Really?

Yeah and he said he loves you too.

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Friday, February 06, 2004
Chapter 7: Once hurt. Twice Abandoned?

Mia ran away. Not her body, but her heart was torn from "them" and she let herself be eaten by her own sorrow and grief. After being abandoned, she was so confused about her feelings. Anger, worry, love, ect. She couldn't seem to recodnize them. Her mother and sister, didn't seem to notice her. It seemed like they hated her, and they ignored her. They had their own worries that they would leave her out of. She couldn't make the difference of reality, and a dream. She wondered if she should "test" the "dream"... TBC

Posted at 2/6/2004 6:25:02 pm by Puchiko2

josie
October 23, 2004   03:41 PM PDT
 
i like the feelings you show in here. emotion, betrayal, you show it so well. all signs of a great writer.
 

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